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i share common feelings. i loved the "umop" (though it took me a while to get it) and the imagery is absoltuely outstanding. the meaning of the poem shinging through ...

i really enjoyed this poem. it was full of random and wonderfully described images and was simply casual but it was true and i definitely know what it feels like ...

I loved the title - thoguh personal quotes from the author in the title often aggravate me. Perhaps that's a personal quirk of mine, but I think you might get ...

Wow. I loved the second stanza, espicially the part that follows: -- the kiss of a wet- eyed man on the subway, harmless and deranged, and we want to kill ...

Right. You know, you'd really be good if you didn't attack everyone who tries to critique your poetry. It's a good thing that I don't go back to poems after ...

I really enjoyed this. It certainly captivated the meaning of Home and held my attetion. The imagery was beautiful and I agreed with your points, which helps me like the ...

Well, don't get me wrong, it was definitely a work of art. Every description was startaling and mind shattering. But the angry outbursts, while adding to the meaning of the ...

I don't have much to say about this. It didn't really move me but it was good. But I didn't like the last two lines - up until then I ...

“There comes a time, In every man’s life, When he realizes he’s alive.” It was a hooking beginning and it held me all the way through. I loved the reference ...

you speak paradoxical phenomenons and your heart is an aura of arrogance I loved the literaries here. Or whatever their called - hence the "paradoxical phenomenons" and the "aura of ...

I loved this stanza: Maybe I'm too young to sit on beer soaked steps and watch the night bleed violently into day but nothing has ever made me feel so ...

The poem had great imagery. I loved this stanza espicially: I could sit with pen in my hand Write me an ocean on how You make me feel so bad ...

Well, I'm guessing this poem is about Kingdom Hearts. Maybe I'm wrong, but you have a Kingdom Hearts icon and the poem seems severely tied to it. Unfortunately, I think ...

That was beautiful? I love the figurative-ness (the way you compared yourself to the diary) and your metaphors (the screaming girl on stage). All in all, the way your phrased ...

Well, I, frankly, was let down. It was okay, but reasonably cliche. The whole reference to death freeing people is insanely overused and was never that beautiful to begin with. ...